Skeltouch Saga, Status of Works in Progress, William I. Zard

Subscriber Preview: Book 2 Back Cover Text

I’m feeling fairly confident about where things are headed for Book 2, so I took a second crack at writing the blurb for it. The first attempt will not see the light of day, since some of the things mentioned there were deleted, and the focus is just wrong. Revisiting the blurb partway through is useful to see whether I am still on course or if the course has changed.

Since I can only write part-time and the time between books is far longer than I would like, I am releasing this version for your enjoyment and hopefully to reassure you that Book 2 really is in progress. Here is a *possible* blurb for Book 2 (subject to further changes, of course). Let me know what you think in the comments.

Sinprejic has finally accepted his talent for magic, but to investigate the disappearance of his parents he will need both power and autonomy. The only option is to travel to the Wizard’s Academy, where he may earn a staff and the title of Mage.

Although the trail of his parents’ mystery is growing cold, his talent for Metamancy is dangerously taboo. The telltale trait of a Metamancer is the ability to learn spells very quickly, so he must conceal his rapid progress and divert attention to his talents in Necromancy (and its application to healing).

On top of this, he has to deal with a deteriorating situation back home between the elves and the D’Arnor barony, news that his brother may be in mortal danger, a strange discovery in the wilderness outside the school, and finding people he can trust in a school where graduating involves fighting other students to the death.

Through it all, there is the growing sense that someone is manipulating him. Is it the ghost haunting him for no clear reason? Is it the current Grand Adept of Necromancy who fears he will be displaced? Maybe it is his Master Morphosius, or Aurcivius the thousand-year-old Archmage, or is it someone else entirely?

Who is working with or for whom? …And why?

William I. Zard

Book Reviews on Storylace

There are a plethora of book-related sites, many of which allow you to track your reads, your To-Be-Read list (TBR), and post your own reviews of books. Today, I’d like to take a moment to promote Storylace, the one I like best, where I post my book reviews.

All authors are readers. You can’t possibly do a good job of writing if you aren’t reading. Before publishing, I had entirely under-appreciated the importance of reviews and ratings to authors, and I probably gave less than a dozen ratings to books before 2023. Now that I’m published, my eyes have opened, and I realize two things.

First, the only possible way for good writing to become promoted by online platforms is if people provide feedback on those platforms. By not rating and reviewing, I had been “all take and no give.” Yes, I paid for the books, but by not expressing my opinion in the system, I was failing to reward good work and help others find it. This is probably a legacy of developing reading habits long before the internet even existed. It took a bit of a mind-shift to realize that I now had the power to influence the market and help other readers after reading the book. Times change, and I needed to adapt.

Second, the process of writing a review cultivates a level of critical thinking about various aspects of writing. I quickly realized that practicing this type of thinking will help me self-evaluate my own writing. I can already see it helping me notice what works and what doesn’t, and giving me aspirations to write scenes that are as effective and evocative as some of my specific favorites. For example, I really admired the reconciliation between Reorden and Kurata in Brandon Sanderson’s Elantris, which converts her from a menace to an ally. That was really well done and satisfying to read. If I can make my readers feel like that at some point, it will be a “Good Thing”.

And so in late 2023, I resolved to write a review for every book I read. There are many sites, but I wanted something that gave me more than 5 stars with which to express myself. Amazon itself is too platform/vendor specific, and I also felt significant dissatisfaction with the poor stewardship of Goodreads by Amazon. I had issues with the way technology features were implemented on others, and I also encountered some author hatred on yet another platform that seemed to have attracted users who view authors as spiteful manipulators incapable of anything but interfering with readers.

When I found Storylace, I knew almost immediately it was a good fit. It’s very creator-friendly and seems to have a deep-seated belief that we are all creators of some sort. They have features for sharing reviews and artwork and are supportive of authors and artists, providing them with tools to tactfully direct readers to the relevant commercial outlets. Some folks only create lists or reviews, others create art or written works. It genuinely feels like all are welcome.

If you want to see what I’ve read recently and my thoughts on other works, feel free to check out my profile on Storylace (login required). My reviews are mostly spoiler-free, and if there is a mild spoiler, I generally tag it so that you have to click to read it.

If you are an author, please be advised that I am an author first and reviewing is only a sideline. I do not currently accept review requests, nor do I plan to any time in the near future. Honestly, you should be seeking reviews from a much more popular YouTube/BookTok/Bookstagram channel than me anyway.

If you are a reader, please bear in mind that overall ratings are not strictly calculated from section scores. Books differ in how important the plot is versus the characters versus the setting. The editing/narration section is mostly there to complain about trivial stuff that got missed, and only has a significant effect on the score if there are missing or incomplete pages or other disasters. There is no single ratio among sections that appropriately represents every book, so the overall score is a general feel, not a mathematical computation. I also have a policy of not putting a number or recommendation on anything I DNF before 50% and not mentioning anything I DNF at less than 20% unless it is traditionally published by a major publishing house. We all deserve a mulligan. To learn, you must fail and then understand why you failed.

If you do check out my reviews, I hope you enjoy them and find them helpful. Feel free to comment on them directly, critique them as a whole here on this post, or share what your favorite review/tracking platform is.

Lore, Skeltouch Saga

Lore Posts for Subscribers

Book 2 in the Skeltouch Saga will take our main character, Sinprejic, out into the world and away from his small town home of Arnoria. I have long had a large amount of conceptual material tucked away in corners of my brain regarding the various regions of the world I am creating. Although the wizards he meets in Metamancer are from other regions, wizards, as a rule, don’t discuss their origins, so I was spared most of the need to formalize and set details in stone.

While the students at the wizard’s academy will also be cagey about their past, I want to be sure that these inexperienced wizards-in-training have some slip-ups and tells that hint at their origins. Also, there will be some non-wizard folks encountered, and later books will visit more regions so I’m going to have to get those right to avoid contradicting myself later. As such, part of my work on the continuation of the series is further fleshing out of the wider world.

To keep my readers entertained and reward those who have subscribed during this process, I’ve decided to publish some subscriber-only posts detailing some of the world lore as it becomes semi-solid. Details may change before publication, but hopefully, the general feel will remain consistent.

Please don’t fear the subscription. Zmancy is not a huge evil company. Right now it’s just me and I have absolutely no use for your email aside from letting you know when I’ve posted something here, I’m attending an event or I (finally!) publish another book. Why have subscriber content at all? For the same reason as every other content creator… to entice you to provide an email I can use to let you know when I’ve created content. Without some way to communicate to my readers, I’m just posting into the void… which is of course fairly pointless.

However, unlike Patreon subscriptions, this one is 100% free.

The first such post will discuss this map of the duchy containing Arnoria, the town on which the first book is centered, ruled by Baron D’Arnor.